Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for
a company or organisation.
Why might this be the case?
What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
Many people prefer to work on their own rather than work as emplyees under the supervison of others in a company. Free lancers become more popular than ever before. While some people prefer to work as a self emplyed , Others find it inconvenient to work for themselves. Both views will be discussed and relevant examples will be provided.
On the one hand, those who prefer to have their own work, believe it gives them better control on their time. For example, an emplyee will have a fixed 9 hours shift daily, however, free lancers will have more flexible working hours. In addition, the salaried person will have his salary as his only source of monthly income , while self emplyed person can have higher income since he will be the owner of the work. Besides, there is no age restriction for the free lancer unlike the salaried person that could retire at the his sixitees.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of having one’s own work. Firstly, the monthly income is variable, it goes up and down with the market unlike having a fixed monthly salary. Secondly, being the owner of the work meaning that you will be busy all the time manging and planning your work. For example, you can find an emplyee who works for 9 hours a day and his shift ends at 5 PM, while there is a lawyer, who has his own office for legal affairs, his phone never stop ringing all day.
It is obvious that both groups of people have their own reasons for their choice. Those who prefer to be more independant , choose to work as self emplyed, while others prefer a predfined daily work schedule. It is recommened that one should consider his own abilities and prefernces before making his decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'freelancer'?
Suggestion: freelancer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65448504983 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24400700405 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0924370848 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194733113705 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784609762305 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818214584012 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150131645173 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710917519863 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.