In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
cashless card is one of the best advancement on society. it has various applications and uses, which most of the transactions around us used up of cards that helps people move to comfort zone. However, it has some disadvantages which make our society more complicated than ever before. considering all this positive and its natural implications, I opine to the fact that cashless cards bring more benefits among societies and people. this essay will elaborate both sides of argument and will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are various factors to support my point of view. To begin with, cards deal with quality of life among people today. moreover, it makes people to complete their work faster and easier. For instance, people use online banking for transactions instead approaching a bank, which makes faster than before. Thus, it can result in better growth in society and become more digitalized.
On the contrary, one can point of various factors opposing the argument. To start with, considering the information security, cashless transaction can result in bad experience. moreover, it plays an integral role in sharing the information across different places, hence, hackers can miss-use our data. For example, people, who taps the card without password, may lose their confidential information and it impacts them with money loss. Therefore, people ask to use cashless card with proper security despite legitimate reasons.
To sum up, I pen down saying that, owing to the positives the use cashless transactions by people has its own advantages and should make with proper security from government with some restrictions in place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 10.5418719212 19% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4030418251 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77716507224 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61216730038 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1932312396 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210809628526 0.242375264174 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650109031526 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460731918091 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128708883908 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458314360333 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.