In some countries around the world, voting is compulsory. Do you agree with the notion of compulsory voting? If it is compulsory in a democratic society, what conclusions can we draw about ‘Nature of democracy?’
Today life, without a compulsory voting, is a fantasy. making voting is compulsory would be wise approach among people and responsible perspective. I agree this statement by saying that voting must be mandatory considering its various benefits in a democratic society.
To begin with, there is a school of thought that makes voting as compulsory could bring exciting advantages in our society. The first and foremost point is that electing leader is an essential part in our life. These leader can change our society by formulating the right policies in order to improve our country's economy. Due to this, our country or society will eventually become in top of the ladder and can be easily compete with other growing countries. The secondary point is that some section of people cannot participate in voting process as they tied with inundated work pressure. thus, it makes those, who are not able to contribute, become responsible citizen.
Furthermore, educating the people about voting awareness is a another key factor. Though, government provide different way to contribute their voting, such as online vote and postal vote, voting percentile is not hundred percent because government cannot connect all the people. thus, government should introduce a new system to formulate the voting system and make it compulsory.
To sum up, I second my outlook of making voting is compulsory always welcoming option, but how people can actively participate during voting day is always a debatable argument. We must see the benefits after making, and that is paramount.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Making
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Message: Did you mean 'this leader' or 'These leaders'?
Suggestion: This leader; These leaders
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Suggestion: Thus
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
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Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, thus, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26693227092 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75778377385 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9537271277 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4285714286 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265621583205 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851259116303 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050011785701 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156918447629 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205192102532 0.0609392437508 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.