Some people believe that government spends too much money on developing space exploration technology . there are many other financial needs that the government should address instead . to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Undoubtedly,spending money on space technology instead other sectors to developed by the government that some think.Although this essay moderately agree because subsides too much funds on this invention research is not well because education and health sectors would most crucial needs for common people.
Subsidizing on space technology,to commence with, can fruitful at some extent for government because of this invention we can know about what happen surrounding the world.In other words, with help of this tech people can easily survive on the planet which has tends to open broad view about internet and its application . GSLV satellite to cite an example,this machinery has been lunched and operated by India on the space ,with help of this satellite Indian citizen can easily access the internet which can not only helpful for educational but also for health purposes.Consequently,inventory of lunching satellite on space has improve lifestyle of earth planet people at some extent.
Despite of this,government also funded for mandatory things namely educational and health sectors .This two fields are much higher need for public because these has prime services that can be provided by higher authorities,owing to this both has primary necessities of individuals.For an example,Indian parliament invest more than fifth quarter on this both fields and not space research .Hence,investing money on this leading sectors which can adequate for particular nations demographic trend.
ON the concluding remark,while,invest money on space exploration can useful but government cannot neglected education as well as public health sectors which can more important for common people.If higher authorities ought to focus more on this area, then it would create imbalance in other fields of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, then, well, while, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67527675277 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49438617692 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571955719557 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.895479691 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 307.6 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.2 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181739227002 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119922726399 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735800401012 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132332864019 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767326204378 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.4 13.0946893788 247% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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