Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace. so it is impossible to combine study and employment. study and employee distract one from another. to what extent agree or disagree? and give your opinion?
In modern era, many people say that good learning requires timing, comfort and peaceful environment, so it is difficult to work and study together. I partly agree with the given statement because people can't do work and study combine. I will discuss my logical arguments as well as my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To start with, fruitful learning take time and comfort, so people can't mix with working, because if student do work and study together they might be distracted from their academics. For example, if student start earning while they are studying they get lot of pressure during their exam and cannot achieved good marks in the academics. As a result, student may improve their personal skill but they may lose their professional development.
On the other hand, combination of learning and working can improve some inner skills. For example, time management skills, such as a person who is working and studying can allocate their time very well for whole day and can be known as multi-tasking person.
To conclude, and in my opinion, student may focus in their study and avoid employment work. If student completed their graduation degree, so they can get high salary jobs easily to convert their basic life style to luxurious life style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...with the given statement because people cant do work and study combine. I will discu...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...arning take time and comfort, so people cant mix with working, because if student do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, while, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1207.87684729 88% => OK
No of words: 210.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04285714286 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55879170039 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2796085977 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.25397266985 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177981463443 0.242375264174 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777650644404 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567727509384 0.071462118173 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110324629069 0.151781067708 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386390552482 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 55.0591133005 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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