government should reduce their investment in arts, music, and painting. Agree or disagree.
Some people say that authority may reduce their investment in arts, music, and painting. In this statement I partly agree with the given statement, the government may reduce money in music and arts and invest their money in other sectors too. My further inclination would be explained in the following paragraphs.
To start with, governments reduce their investment in arts; music and painting field and invest their money on infrastructure, economy, job creation, foreign investment and so on. In other words, if the Indian government invest their money in foreign so India makes a strong interpersonal relationship with the opponent country. As a result, country improves their economic growth as well as also increase job employment ratio not only in their country but also foreign too.
On the other hand, investing in art, music and painting field can get prestige not only person but also a country on international. For example, Arijit Singh has good command in singing. Additionally, by giving outstanding performance in music field, he became a rising star of their nation and his story gives motivational spirits to the younger generation that how an ordinary boy could reach higher level of the nation.
To conclude, investing money by the government in music and art field has some advantages but in my point of view invest money in a foreign country and other sectors give a strong relationship with other country and increase the financial growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could reach higher level of the nation. To conclude, investing money by the gove...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, as a result, as well as, in other words, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.5418719212 9% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18067226891 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8142510869 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550420168067 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7296467963 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.3 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.25397266985 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350626501942 0.242375264174 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151330789259 0.0925447433944 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138504120354 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221903401595 0.151781067708 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118621937557 0.0609392437508 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.5310837438 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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