A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is irrefutable fact, most of the people believe that the ethical values such as honour,kindness and trust have become unimportant and the only indispensable thing is accounted ,the amount of money a person has. I strongly disagree with this statement.
The first and the foremost reason can be taken into account is, the modernization world. In this contemporary era, individuals are encouraging themselves to fake show off in term of getting famous among people. For example, it is observed that most of the youngsters are willing to buy expensive electronic gadgets such as .iPhone, Apple products etcetera;for making their superior image in front of their kith and kin. Apart from this, they are becoming materialistic for acquiring luxurious lifestyle for the sake of this, some vulgar actions are performing by persons which lead to the occurrence of depletion in values of relationship, additionally these consequences have given born to social evils.
There is no doubt that respect towards richer people has increased in the last few decades. However this does not mean that a rich person is more valued. The value of affluent family is analysed by their action of honour and kindness.
For instance, the Bill Gates one of the most respected person ; is not because of money but due to the charitable acts. Further more there are also a lot of celebrities such as actors and sports persons who have given sport and help to the poverty-stricken children.
To recapitulate, with the given aforementioned plausible discussion, it is abundantly cleared that the truth will always be truth, as money cannot buy happiness. There is no need to run after these things. it is easily seen that the more the poor the help the more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, apart from, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12195121951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91428474167 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620209059233 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9803179327 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13693802115 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458979877419 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355082594632 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766113222968 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383556197223 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.