All education and healthcare should be funded by government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The education system and medical facilities are important necessities of an individual, hence government is bound to fund more towards them and make these available free of cost to every citizen of the country. I fully support this idea and think that these two are the basic problems in the developing countries. Though, some rules should always be laid down so that it should not get misused.
Government should spend huge amount in the healthcare sector and developing good education system in their country. When these things are availed freely by the citizens, the people get more focussed on building and learning new things. They do not juggle around other things like paying for their health insurance or spending on the institutions for getting good education. Furthermore, they will try to channelize their money in the economy of the country that will indirectly escalate growth of the nation.
In contrast to above, other has opinion that the privatisation of the healthcare sector and education assists more in the progress of the country. Private sectors bring forth more jobs and opportunities to the people through which they can easily afford lavish living standards. For instance in USA, the privatisation of all sectors has given new edge to the country. But can this be made possible in developing and underdeveloped countries too?
In the end, the government should made the two essential needs of the people always free to its citizen that will make them more secured and dependable on the government, strengthening the country, in my opinion. However, privatisation also brings more income to the country and increasing opportunities for the people though that is unachievable in poorer countries due to lack of resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to lavish'
Suggestion: to lavish
...le through which they can easily afford lavish living standards. For instance in USA, ...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rer countries due to lack of resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, so, then, for instance, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20141342756 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83207556831 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547703180212 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9014282324 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197601236234 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685604067951 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480563318401 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11656848397 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227496232523 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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