Some people think the purpose of education is to prepare the future workforce and make good members of society. Others think the purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. What is your opinion?
In this competitive era, education becomes an essental part of everyone's life. Education helps to become a independent individual and responsible member of society. Educated person can easily change the mindset of society against their traditional through process and its shapes the world. In upcoming paragraph, I will give my opinion about education.
To begin with the true purpose of education is to became the person future ready for family, society and nation. For example, our scientist Dr.A P J Abdul Kalam, who has prepared workforce ready for future. Educated person understands the need of society and they try to fulfill the same. They lead the society and show the correct direction to society and helps everyone to choose right path. Future workforce lead the nation and our nation will become healthy and wealthy.
On the contrary part, other think purpose of education should lead to self-fulfillment. Once the person get the degree, they get the job and money. Automatically they become wealthy and they can enjoy levies life. Bust alone self fulfillment does not work every time. Society and even family do not allow the people who are selfish. We need to think of other people and society around us rather than self fulfillment.
In net shell, the true and foremost purpose of education is to prepare workforce for future and make them good member of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...eryones life. Education helps to become a independent individual and responsible ...
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Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...d nation. For example, our scientist Dr.A P J Abdul Kalam, who has prepared workf...
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Line 7, column 383, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...to society and helps everyone to choose right path. Future workforce lead the nation ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12719298246 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58514591044 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 139.433497537 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.045407685 50.4703680194 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.0625 104.977214359 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.9669160288 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.25397266985 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365028666787 0.242375264174 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113823351228 0.0925447433944 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134362378151 0.071462118173 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229707317652 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952206519783 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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