Discuss the importance of cars and airplane in modern life. Give examples.
The important effect of the importance of cars and airplane in modern life which was always debatable has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of importance of cars and airplane in modern life has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend in the recent year on cars and airplane in modern life. It can be agreed that cars and airplane plays vitals role in everyone life and this means of transportation has made the person's life easier in this 21st century.
At the outset, there are numerous reason why cars and airplane are important in modern life but the most conspicuous one steam's from the fact that cars and airplane helps the people to move from one place to another place within a minutes, hour etc. As an illustration, A current study shows in America, five tourist travel from Chicago to Kentucky with in an hour through airplane in 2017, if there were not airplane it takes more than 24 hours distance. In addition, it helps the people to travel from one place to another place with few time, which save the people money, time etc. Thus, cars and airplane is very necessary means of transportation in this modern life which helps the people to travel easily in a certain time limit.
Another key of justification for upholding the notion is that cars and airplane helps the people to import and export the goods from one place to another place. For instance cars and airplane are very helpful to people. Thus, cars and airplane is very necessary in human life.
From what has been discussed above it can be concluded the importance of transportation is prominent and it helps the people to travel long and short distance so it is very beneficial in humans modern life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...is means of transportation has made the persons life easier in this 21st century. ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a minute' or simply 'minutes'?
Suggestion: a minute; minutes
... from one place to another place within a minutes, hour etc. As an illustration, A curren...
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Line 5, column 537, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...el from one place to another place with few time, which save the people money, time etc....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 300.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79333333333 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54209012866 2.71678728327 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.580463131201 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.422315471 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.727272727 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410155600629 0.242375264174 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201648079151 0.0925447433944 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117782141394 0.071462118173 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274030259351 0.151781067708 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108580510852 0.0609392437508 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 12.6369458128 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.1260098522 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.9458128079 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.5310837438 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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