the diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of salmon.
It is clear that the life cycle of salmon consists of three main stages that three types of it (in scale) appear and live for about 10 years.
At the first stage, adult salmon put their eggs under the small stones next to reeds in upper rivers. It takes about five to six month for fires to come out from eggs, with 3-8 centimetres length. Next, fires migrate to the fast-flowing river, which is called the lower river and live there for near 4 years. During this period, they become bigger to 12-15 centimetres in length and named 'smolt'. Then, smolts change their place to open sea and stay there for 5 years about. Finally, as an adult salmon by 70-76 centimetres length go to the slow-moving river to put their eggs on the bottom of the river and the cycle will repeat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...pper rivers. It takes about five to six month for fires to come out from eggs, with 3...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47368421053 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06687869374 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4415423394 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150539377148 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079875284389 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1120130546 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180108351034 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127348726581 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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