In recent years, many small local shops have closed customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or negative development?
In the modern times, the petite local shops have less sales when compared with big shopping centers.people are giving more importance to the bigger shopping malls.This essay briefs whether the preference of people to big shopping malls is a positive development or a negative one.
Previously,before the inauguration of huge shopping malls,people were driven towards the small shops and were purchasing their daily requirements in these shops.These shops had less price when compared to the shops in the malls.For example,if a person wants a watch he might go to a normal watch shop where he gets a huge collection of watches at a reasonable price. The people were satisfied with what was available in the local shops
On the other hand, the shopping malls have attracted many people in terms of branded,expensive products and they are happy to entertain themselves inside the theatres and continue their shopping in the same place after the movie gets over.people also got attracted towards the branded items.For example, a huge collection of branded watch shops such as the titan,timex,fast track are available in the malls.The malls have exclusive vehicle parking where it is easy for the people to get their vehicle parked.These malls have pulled the people towards them leaving the local mini shops to incur a huge loss.This in turn makes many number of shopkeepers to shut down their shops and open one inside the mall where the rent is too high.In turn the people are also affected by this as they are levied a big price when compared with the purchase at the local shops.
In the conclusion,the malls have brought a remarkable negative impact for all the small shopkeepers in terms of sales as well as the people in terms of expenses but the people are not aware of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00668896321 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86706161102 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494983277592 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 301.231223481 49.4020404114 610% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 374.25 106.682146367 351% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.75 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296018155529 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188905423491 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680411358113 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19192537918 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652733646955 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 4.83 50.2224549098 10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.96 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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