Travelling to study is over-rated. We have brilliant scholars who studied locally. Is travel really necessary for tertiary studies?
The importance of brilliant scholors who study locally because when the scholars travel they know about the so many things which is related to their studies.when students are at home they cannot study properly when they can go to the study related places it is very good for all the students which students are brillient in their they can see the things and learn easily.Some students which are not good in studies when they can go to study related places they can learn easily and more.The travel is very good for the nill students some teachers suggested the students that they can learn from books but it is not good beacause when the students learn from books they cannot learn easily.Some students easily go to the foreign for their higher studies they learn more and easily because in foreign students can learn with the help of the assignments which is very good process,But in india students learn with the help of the books.In one day teachers and students go to the trip for related to education which is very good for the every student.in foreign tstudents are go to the library if any problem.SO in last i think travel is neccessary for the studies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70588235294 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34682108482 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397058823529 0.622605031667 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 204.0 16.3608247423 1247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 960.0 76.5299724578 1254% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 204.0 16.8248392259 1212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.0 4.34317383033 460% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177322271898 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177322271898 0.0766984524023 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177322271898 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 102.8 8.37731958763 1227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -118.66 70.7449484536 -168% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 80.5 7.45979381443 1079% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.52 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.08 7.59969072165 212% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 83.6 8.54432989691 978% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 84.0 8.15463917526 1030% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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