Some people believe laws change human behavior. Agree or disagree?
In the present millennium, the world is being bombarded with a variety of global problems most importantly many forms of violence raised up day by day. Thus, new laws were created rapidly in every corner of the world. In the past people were controlled by values, tradition and culture because they have simple life style. However in present, human can’t be controlled by values or their own tradition because people rapidly evolving with new technological development environment with vertical lifestyle. On the other hand mainly laws affected to the person’s behavior in mentally and physically.
Dramatically, as the world less safer place in compared to the past because people behavior changed with hidden technology such as cyber bullying, cyber crimes, looting and rape. Thus, all Governments need to focus on their laws for change every individual’s behavior physically and mentally with fast changing society whilst few are maintaining their sedentary life style with their own values and norms. On the other hand in the rapidly evolving era, people must need to laws for control their habit and behaviors nevertheless, their freedom will become massive violence to the world. Human must need to control in minimum to maximum level in all ways such as family rules, company rules, cultural rules, regional wise rules and local or international government rules.
In conclusion I strongly agree with statement because capital punishment certainly does have the potential to eliminate crime and violence. Thus, according to the above discussion, in the present society, laws create a person with well behavioral than values.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 324, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...re because they have simple life style. However in present, human can't be control...
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Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: LESS_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean 'less safe'?
Suggestion: less safe
...hysically. Dramatically, as the world less safer place in compared to the past because p...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 20.9802955665 38% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43579766537 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79919377245 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591439688716 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7942569055 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196554679136 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755341627516 0.0925447433944 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401305150158 0.071462118173 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129650649805 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306943863734 0.0609392437508 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 12.6369458128 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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