Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Advantages and disadvantages of travel in a group has been a popular debated issue in the social media lately. While some people claim that tour guide has some downsides others maintain that it constitute a number of undeniable benefits. Although both sides have several pros and cons, I am of the opinion that a tour guide offers numerous advantages. It is elucidated the details of my support with some tangible detail and examples in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, Many people want to discover new places in a vacation. They do plan with details that include some destination in different countries. But they can not reach enough knowledge about historical places or cities. But a tour guide is known as an expert who takes professional education about tourism. For example, when people visit a historical places, they do not know details regarding background. Tour guide tell old settlement and dynasty who reign for many years. Moreover, people spend enjoyable times thanks to tour guide who can find unique vacation places.
On the other hand, vacation cost is the main problem for people. They tend to spend lower but do not. Because they do not have enough information regarding vacation places. For instance, all people need dinner or breakfast which is important daily activity. Tour guide do plans between eating locations and places. Finally, They will be affordable all people.
Many tourist attractions have security problem. People want to be secure when they are in vacation. People tend to steal their money or bags. Many people do not have knowledge about vacation place's downsides. But tour guide has exact information and details whether street or places are secure.
To sum up, travelers increase from one year to next year. It entails doing plan about travel program. According to expert, travel is in a group with tour guide best option. İt includes that secure policy, low cost and knowledge about vacation places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uide tell old settlement and dynasty who reign for many years. Moreover, people s...
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...e. They tend to spend lower but do not. Because they do not have enough information reg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16927899687 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53793459675 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.9020746296 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.4230769231 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2692307692 20.6045352989 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.65384615385 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136966747449 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419354622849 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515116998834 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875946998128 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477097957655 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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