smoking in public places should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
it is well known that, smoking is injurious to health, however many people still smoke. smoking is completely a personal act that causes health issues for both smoker and people around him. therefore, it should be completely banned in public places.
Despite, the negative impact of smoking on public health, it is not completely banned in the world for some economic reasons. For instance, it generates a large amount of tax, jobs and custom duties for any government. Due to these financial benefits, if government does not want to ban it completely, at least it should be prohibited in public places because of its negative impact on health. Further, prohibition of smoking in public places will develop perception of non-smoking society that will result in less smoking. A study published last year highlighted that passive smoking is more dangerous than active smoking; therefore banning it in public place will decrease the negative outcome of passive smoking.
smoking in public is very tempting act for young children, who are in age of learning and adopting new things from their environment, consequently they start smoking to show off among their peers. public smoking is directly polluting environment, so banning it will decrease the environmental pollution especially air pollution.
In conclusion, there are some economical benefits involved with smoking for governments however it should be prohibited in public by law to decrease its negative impact on public health and environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39662447257 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82068062827 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582278481013 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8106790105 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.272727273 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261369276295 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116515893336 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631685927094 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175286940865 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035602998327 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.