Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, zoos are becoming less common than in the past and people tend to go other place to visit like museum or theatre. Hence, while many people argue that zoos are all inhuman and should be closed, other opinion think that zoos are very necessary and useful to protect wild animals. Personally, I will look at both views and give my opinion in the following essay.
Beyond question, there are various compelling reasons why people think zoos are cruel and useless. First of all, zoos tend to focus on the profits instead of the welfare of the animals. In fact, the zoos train animals so hard to entertain visitors just for getting money out of them. As a result, animal will have various problems like physical strain, illness and lead to reduce the lifespan of these animals. In addition, animals have their own right, they should live in freedom life in forest instead of captivity them.
On the other hand, zoos still bring numerous benefits for people. Firstly, zoos provide the habitat for animals, which help them avoid many issuers from wildlife such as predator, diseases and the like. Besides, there are many animals that are listing in red book of the world, who are becoming extinction, they really need the help from government and scientist to maintain lineage of these animals. Finally, zoos help educate and enhance the knowledge for children about animal life, which material they fail to find in books or televisions.
In conclusion, zoos play a crucial role for animals and bring many advantages not only for animals but also for people and children. By contracts, there are still many issues that need to be overcome in maintenance and takeover of zoos, which government should be considered.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, look, really, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96219931271 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32901989596 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7442360913 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303955179947 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107367675884 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100554707874 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194305170866 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122633566644 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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