Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals.
Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Environmental problems have aroused over the past years to reduce repercussions on the future planet. Despite the fact that environmental problems are accelerating rapidly and loss of creatures and use of petroleum energy influence to the Earth, there are different perspectives of what is the most detrimental problem among scientists. This essay will discuss the both point of views and personally, I agree with the idea which the use of oil is the main problem.
To start with, many contend that decline of creatures is the huge problem. Decreasing number of bees would eventually devastate the planet due to loss of forests. To explain that, bees are tiny but indeed do the biggest role in the nature. They fly to obtain flowers’ secretion and thus, bees spread out pollen all over the forests. Hence, flowers flourish with help of bees’ role and offer shelters, preys, water and fresh oxygen to all the creatures, including humans, so that it is impossible to live without such tiny insects. However, if bees disappear, not only their predators are no longer able to survive due to the loss of foods and shelters but humans also cannot breathe with lack of oxygen. Therefore, the collapse of food chains will definitely influence for creatures’ wellbeing.
On the other hand, the industrial developments, in fact, have brought us convenient daily lives but also have destroyed nature. The use of oil energy has to be prioritized in environmental issues, others argue. They suggest that pollution from automobiles, aeroplanes and plants affect to the planet and human health. Emission from such inventions increase in proportion of carbon-dioxide in the air which contribute to global warming. Having said that, the loss of bees is the main problem, however, air pollution organisations argue that factor of bees’ loss should be discussed and say it is due to the oil combustion.
In conclusion, loss of bees and other creatures is outside of our interests but it affects to the environment, however, others contend that emission contribute to pollution rapidly as well as actual reason of nature loss should be discussed. Therefore, I advocate to the use of fuel needs to be decreased for the bright future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18406593407 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9174478974 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552197802198 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.141682642 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4117647059 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165372492057 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493970801956 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528554153502 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112008363976 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568961758017 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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