Some people think that zoos are cruel and that all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful for protecting rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals play a significant role in eco-system. They are the important creatures which makes a balance in the eco-system. It is argued by many that zoos should close while others believe that it is a good way to protect endangered species. I intend to delve both the aspects and will form a conclusion with my opinion.
There are many reasons why zoos should be closed. To begin with, zoos create a pressure on animals which leads to stress. To explain it more, Animals are being transferred from one place to another and as a result, they get separated from their mothers.secondly, animals are speechless and they can't express their feelings. For example, if the zoo is not conducting a check up or may be the room is not enough for them than this situation is beyond their comfort zone. Next, animals are a part of eco system and hence, they are natural habitants. It is more preferred to live in wild than closed environment.
On the other side, there are several reasons why zoos are useful in protecting rare species. Firstly, zoos are crucial part of education for children. It is impossible to see some animals in real life. So, children can acquire a great deal of knowledge and experience. Secondly, it is the best way to protect endangered species. Moreover, if zoos do not keep these animals, than they will be killed by hunters or can be used by scientists for their researchers. Finally, it has been in a research study that animals live longer in zoos than wild life as they get proper food and taken care. Although the future is uncertain but they tends to live longer in zoos.
To close, animals are the precious creäture of the almighty and should be kept safe from unnecessary dangers. In my perspective, it is the right way to aim to keep a threatened species from hunting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69400630915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65849570975 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4257726012 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247298745106 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07695812628 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853731915053 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138908686279 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0719890261828 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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