violence at these events is on the increase. Why is this so? What should authorities do to prevent violence from taking place at sports events?
It is a truth that nowadays people are taking a lot of interest in sports and games. Some people are so obsessed with games that they follow each and every match of their favorite player and prefers to watch the tournaments at the venue itself.
These days, there has been a trend followed by people to watch live matches at the venue rather than watching on TV or live broadcast. some people don't realize the fact that going there can be dangerous because under extreme circumstances when any violent follower saw losing the game, they can become violent and can throw used bottles or cans towards the opponents. For instance, there was an altercation between two parties on a cricket match because one was hooting and the other couldn't bear the noise created by them. Even at some places, bet system is used for the winning team. it also promotes violence and crimes.
However, the government should take stringent actions for any kind of violent behavior. there will be a double check on the entrance for the candidates having any criminal record in the past. Entry should be barred in such a case. Apart from that, the intoxicating drinks such as beer or any type of alcohol should be completely restricted and the aerated glass bottles must be banned. The police should be deployed after every one slot so to keep an eye on each individual. A heavy penalty should be posed for the wrongdoers.
To elucidate, it is the responsibility of each candidate to behave in a proper manner at such events. one's good temperament can set an example to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76727272727 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46985394556 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607272727273 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3407356921 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127969425977 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472552272735 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327735926652 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735125130158 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187446591261 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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