Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good?
There has been unprecedented technological progress in 21st century, and it has been questioned whether or not such development would have positive effects. I believe that this trend could have both beneficial and detrimental consequences.
Highly advanced science and engineering have increasingly improved personal and broad societal standards. From a personal perspective, sophisticated civilisation, thanks to technological development, has certainly increased the quality of life for many people. For example, transportation has become more efficient and faster in a way that anyone can travel anywhere in the world in a day, and this makes individuals can access different nations quicker than ever. In this way, travelling around the world or meeting family or friends who live far away is no longer a worrying problem. On a social level, an explosion in the use of automation has boosted many factories and plants’ productivities, which leads to greater prosperity of a nation.
Nevertheless, such development has also produced disturbing concerns as to the arguments given above. First and foremost, progressed communication through devices results in a lack of face-to-face interactions. For instance, many young adults are more likely to prefer contacts with their families or relatives via emails, texts, and even updates on social media. this could be attributed to reducing physical interactions between individuals. From the economic point of view, it is often argued that the automation of productions and services adversely decrease the rate of unemployment, as businesses no longer require workers to produce their products or provide certain services.
In conclusion, it seems to me that developments of technology as a positive role to act for humanity is debatable because such trend has both pros and cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71582733813 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26713967346 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661870503597 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0689150146 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0728826806467 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214773882194 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0242171536651 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0402566106465 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194914007745 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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