It is important for school children to study music, art, and sport as it is for them to become literature and numerate. How far do you agree with this statement? support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
The issue raises a controversy about the recent inventions as it becoming essential parts for everyday living. I agree with the previous statements and this will be further discussed before reaching a conclusion.
At the outset, there are several reasons why it can be stated that the recent inventions have become an essential part of modern living. The first being that, people tend to use these modern electrical, electronic and mechanical equipment more frequently in day to day activities. To cite an example on the matter, without using these latest gadgets we will not be able to send emails, prepare coffee, tap our travel card.
Another key justification for upholding this notion is due to the fact that immense impact can be noticed if we keep put such things away from our life. Correspondingly, it is crucial to note that without these modern day equipments life would be so different.
In light of the above discusssion, it can be conclude that recent inventions are more beneficial and fruitful to human being in all aspects of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 1207.87684729 74% => OK
No of words: 176.0 242.827586207 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09659090909 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.92707691288 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77921651216 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 379.143842365 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.050918613 50.4703680194 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.125 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.25397266985 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871587875538 0.242375264174 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432986088567 0.0925447433944 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459615329136 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602929410843 0.151781067708 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585521908621 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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