It is important for school children to study music, art, and sport as it is for them to become literature and numerate. How far do you agree with this statement? support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e literature and numerate in the block. Thus the discrepancies mean to connote with ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...with to become literature and numerate. Still the above investigation executes the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill the above investigation executes the people unhappy in this society. The...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...ledge for children is hype the context. Further gaining memory is notable to give added...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...oot which varies remains in a conflict. Hence gaining memory is decisive entail that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, so, still, thus, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 228.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16228070175 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64762287617 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0562291515 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0714285714 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.12807881773 218% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277553599892 0.242375264174 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864071290957 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734082089266 0.071462118173 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936923268802 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750351833544 0.0609392437508 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 12.6369458128 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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