Some people say student should not given homework by their teachers on the other hand some say it play most important role in child development.Discuss the both view and with your opinion.
nowadays education become most important thing of every people life all over the world. It is argued that homework should not be given by the teacher to students while on the other hand Some people says its important in the child education.This essay will discuss the both view along with my opinion for such thinking subsequently.
To commence with, to much home work can disturb the capability of child in education.Beacuse nowdays its seem that most schools give lots of home works and projects because of this kids remains no time left for there enjoyment time and for playing and physical activity also play major role in kid development.For intanse survey done in Top schools of India and the result was the very shocking the schools which give much task for the home that find more sick and inactive physically.Hence putting that much burden on children can be hurdle in there development.
However, home task have also positive side in the every people life its that put them on track.Since if students not given home work to do at home, they can become careless and less attentive in class and its can spoil their life hometask is the that help every student to learn discipline and good habits .For example a test conducted in school in which for months children where not given homework for one months and they find that student who are more intelligent are becoming dull. Therefore to maintain the child life and set them on right track homework is beautiful creation for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83657587549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56028763013 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 195.177252773 49.4020404114 395% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.6 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.4 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.6 7.06120827912 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257502270434 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156003976306 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163317316553 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206347815369 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174941699037 0.056905535591 307% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.0946893788 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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