In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence.
To maintain modern lifestyle most of the families realize that both parents need to go to work for support family. Some people think this is very beneficial for family and other thinks that, this has very bad effect to children because of parent’s absence.
On the one hand, todays life is very expensive to maintain. Food, living and educational cost are increasing rapidly. So, one person cannot effort these expenses by working. This is a crucial cause of working both parents out. Though, there are some advantages of earning both parents in the family, such as better education for children, can use expensive cloths and upgrade social status. These are the main benefits for earning both parents in family. There some others can be counted.
On the other hand, close company of parents is very important for children life development. When father and mother both working out for extra income, at that time the children feel lonely at home. They miss parental love and it makes distance from their parents. Also, it is very important of parent’s presence for develop mental and physical growth. One child can get best education for behavioral and social aspect. To develop communication skill of child, parents are most important and there no other comparison can be set.
In conclusion, it can say that, income more money for supporting family is important but developing child’s life and give their love and time is more important. To build a good family relationship can give a happiness and prosper in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...ntal and physical growth. One child can get best education for behavioral and social asp...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06692913386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58775247907 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5615941034 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7058823529 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9411764706 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345894415131 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111340697892 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070146130538 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209219353062 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631578983337 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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