The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph compares the proportion of exports from Australia, to Japan, the USA, China and India between 1990 and 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the largest percentage of exports went to Japan before 2005. However, the proportion of exports to China overtook those to Japan after 2005.
In 1990, exports to Japan accounted for 27% of the total, more than double the figure for Australian exports to the USA. By contrast, exports to China and India were low, at 2% and 1%, respectively. While the proportion of exports to Japan fell to 19% and exports to the USA fell to 9% in 1995, the figure for exports to China and India rose slowly.
There was a gradual decrease in the proportion of exports to Japan, which stood at 18% in 2012. The US export market fluctuated, but the trend after 1995 was downward, finishing at 7% of total exports at the end of the period. Although exports to India also fluctuated, these rose overall to 6% in 2012. The most significant change, however, was the growth in exports to China, overtaking those to Japan, and reaching a peak of 30% in 2012.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oportion of exports to Japan fell to 19% and exports to the USA fell to 9% in 199...
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Line 13, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this rose' or 'these rises', 'these roses'?
Suggestion: this rose; these rises; these roses
...hough exports to India also fluctuated, these rose overall to 6% in 2012. The most signif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67010309278 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46348613745 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494845360825 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3820014404 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255203554192 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118206038614 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603998870005 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175483551587 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595270230068 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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