More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work.
what will be the consequences of this? what solutions can you offer?
Apparently, in this world acquiring a proper job has become one of the most challenging problems. Daily, a huge number of humans find migration as the best strategy to overcome this problem. That is exactly why rural residences are likely to relocate to cities and abandon their homelands. Consequently, this issue has brought a massive number of difficulties in both rural and urban areas. This essay intends to discuss more about this matter and present some solutions to remove the possible roots as follows.
Recently, people who live in cities constantly complain that individuals who have relocated to there are the main responsible of endless problems including air pollution, high rate of crimes, suburbanite, overcrowding , and so on. In other words, there is no balance between the civil facilities as well as infrastructures and the rate of population growth. For example, waiting for hours in the metro stations is one of the side effects of this irregular migrations which makes humans reschedule their essential works. On the other hand, agriculture has seen few damages adversely because the adolescent are not ready to work on the farmlands anymore. As a result, the domestic supplies would decrease and the government need to import the foodstuffs.
So, what is the solution? It seems that there is no short-time plan to deals with this problem. However, the governments are able to reduce this trend by preparing the local jobs for villagers especially younger to convince them to live in their homelands. Moreover, making new facilities can make the villages more appealing for people and they never compare their living places with advanced cities. Finally, long term loans can come in handy to support the agriculture sector in terms of expanding cultivated lands.
In conclusion, this trend should be stopped, otherwise the knock-on effects of this contemporary phenomena will be unpredictable. Thus, encouraging villagers financially, through various ways is the proper choice to ease off this obstacle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'deal'.
Suggestion: deal
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...roper choice to ease off this obstacle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3198757764 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88108068346 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3951586973 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22410785557 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625072140532 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522249855939 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120496665978 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275243545105 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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