At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nobody can deny that population of every country plays a crucial role in development. The diversity of a nation mainly defines what will be the outcomes from the country as a whole. The diversity can include the youth, middle-aged and old people. In some countries total number of youth overlays the elderly which constitutes for having more positives than negatives.
The young minds can contribute towards the nations development in many different ways. This coming generation has got that zest in them which is much more than people of other generations. Year round, there have been news about a lot of teenage people inventing new things and some running business which are the strongest examples of the skills they are having. More youngsters means more innovative minds which directly sums up to having best solutions to almost everything that comes up. Lets take an example of 2nd most populated country of the World - India, where there are more youngsters than any other country henceforth new innovations are more. For the surgical strike named ‘URI’ the Spy camera (shaped like a Bird) that was used was made by an intern in ISRO. There are more similar examples that show that young adults can do more good to the countries than older people.
On the other hand, this is well understood age gives experience and a more clearer way to look at things but also the power of thinking about new ways is somewhere reduced. The best example for this point will surely be China, well known for it’s population. In there old people are more in comparison to young ones and they are hiring people from countries like India to increase their workforce. Undoubtably, Youngsters have more stamina and working minds than older people which can help the country to grow in best possible way.
To Sum up, Youngsters can contribute more towards the growth of a country in comparison to older people. So, Surely the advantages overweigh the disadvantages of having comparably large number of young people over old.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
... young minds can contribute towards the nations development in many different ways. Thi...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...bute towards the nations development in many different ways. This coming generation has got th...
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Line 5, column 369, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...les of the skills they are having. More youngsters means more innovative minds which direc...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the best'.
Suggestion: having the best
...ovative minds which directly sums up to having best solutions to almost everything that com...
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ons to almost everything that comes up. Lets take an example of 2nd most populated c...
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Line 9, column 71, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
...l understood age gives experience and a more clearer way to look at things but also the powe...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...ople which can help the country to grow in best possible way. To Sum up, Youngster...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01474926254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57687849309 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4100010866 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180091500602 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648906108048 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591409937932 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140647529403 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710757367825 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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