Pie charts
The three pie charts compare the proportions of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three separated types of diet.
Overall, it is obvious that a healthy diet for sport has the highest percentage of carbohydrates. While the share of fat occupies the lowest in each diet.
There is an equality between carbohydrates and protein for an average diet, which accounted for 40% in total. The differences between those two elements in a healthy diet and a healthy diet for sport are significant, which 20% and 35% respectively. In the broadest view, a healthy diet needs 50% carbohydrates, 10% lower compared with that for sport and 30% protein whose a healthy diet for sport is 25%.
Conversely, the percentage of fat takes the smallest share amongst the three categories. The fat that an average diet and healthy diet have is the same, which is 20% in total. this number of healthy diet for sport is 15%, which is 5% lower in comparison with two other numbers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he highest percentage of carbohydrates. While the share of fat occupies the lowest in...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'need'?
Suggestion: need
...y. In the broadest view, a healthy diet needs 50% carbohydrates, 10% lower compared w...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: WHOSE_DT[5]
Message: Did you mean 'who's'?
Suggestion: who's
...red with that for sport and 30% protein whose a healthy diet for sport is 25%. Con...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ave is the same, which is 20% in total. this number of healthy diet for sport is 15%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85975609756 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82168875395 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 231.3 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4864725427 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0506920595226 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0309936161473 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087663184605 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697356363315 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120785665224 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.