childhood is consider to be more happiest part of life?
We live in an age when many of us take a part in ongoing deliberation of the statement that life stands for various meaning depending on people.Some people cherish the memories of childhood while other opine that creating memories for later stage in life is more peaceful. The merits of these both arguments will be analysed before a conclusion is decided upon.
First and foremost,people always believed that in childhood they enjoyed life more happily,they always wants to live the life which they've already lived in the initial ages.For example,memories back from school always left people nostalgic,playing those outdoor game with pals,in addition in to this it can be said that the teenage life is most indispensable chunk of people life as in the childhood they are not responsible for same issues of life such as family and financial crises,they always feel pampered as they have parents to take care of.All of such things gives pleasure in childhood which adult people can not cherish easily.
When it comes to adulthood,some people advocate that there are some things which only an adult can do.The adult people have rights to decide their journey of life themselves and this freedom can be enjoyed by very few teenagers.On the contrary,the work pressure,the huge responsibility towards the family,the distress period of life make the matured life more complex predominantly people cherish teenage chunk of their life the happiest one.
In the nutshell,it is felt that we cherish the days of happiness more which is being related by teenage but I opine that offspring's will be probably cajole by their spouse to lead a healthy life, we can convert hell into heaven by our own thought process and both the stages of life have something marvelous to offer for being happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, while, for example, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 20.9802955665 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09491525424 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82292905841 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6551724138 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.5024630542 288% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.383771208 50.4703680194 361% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.6 104.977214359 286% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 20.9669160288 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.4 7.25397266985 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30847863167 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158518660682 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491429766325 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188232117217 0.151781067708 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127988094798 0.0609392437508 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 12.6369458128 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 53.1260098522 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 10.9458128079 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.3980295567 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.5123152709 247% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.