Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rapid development of high-technology, various robots show up and bring convenience to our life. Some people agree with this opinion, while others disagree with it, claiming robots are bring danger and negative effects on society.
The appearance of robots can work more efficiently and safely, which is beneficial to all people in future. Unlike human beings, robots can work endlessly and perfectly, which means they can produce more products with high-quality. On the contrary, if human do the same work in the same time, they aren’t able to work in such a flawless and efficient way. Therefore, in future, more high-quality products can provide people with a good quality of life. Also, robots can work in some harsh environment where may threaten people’s lives, such as South Pole and rainforests that may be full of poisonous insects, which ensures the lives of people who work there.
The appearance of robots may take the place of some employees’ job and cause negative effects on society. Since robot can produce way more efficiently than human, some works used to be done by people, especially low-skilled jobs, can be fully replaced be robots. And then the unemployment rate will be raised and bring instability to the society.
Furthermore, the appearance of robots may bring danger to society, because they can be easily used by others to do something terrible. Robots are at bottom machines that can be simply controlled by people no matter good people or bad people. Once bad people make use of smart robots, they may execute crimes, like hatching computers and stealing private information, even may threaten safety of a whole country.
As far as I concerned, robots offer more positive effects than the dangerous and negative effects. The unemployment problem caused by robots can be solve by government. For example, government can give the unemployed financial support and help them find other jobs. Moreover, if government can strictly managed the use of robots, they cannot be utilized by criminals. All the problems brought by robots can be worked out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'brought'.
Suggestion: brought
...s disagree with it, claiming robots are bring danger and negative effects on society....
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fely, which is beneficial to all people in future. Unlike human beings, robots can work e...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... flawless and efficient way. Therefore, in future, more high-quality products can provide...
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Line 17, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'manage'
Suggestion: manage
...s. Moreover, if government can strictly managed the use of robots, they cannot be utili...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20467836257 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79911930973 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9090500646 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20896285943 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805147076123 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650400928144 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136013499943 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034271722598 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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