Many People now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. why people do risk their lives in this way ,and do you think is a good trend ?
Recent days I came across many adventures like sky diving, hiking, mountain climbing. there are very few people have that courage to do all risky things. Sometimes i would like to give a try of all adventurers, since my health condition i avoid generally.
Whenever i see people who are more enthusiastic and energetic i have great feel of them. one of my friends is having super power to do all the activities like mountain climbing, recently she visited Everest with her trekking team. Recent day’s I’m seeing many trekking, cycling clubs in my city. It’s good to people get engaged other than usual things.
Hiking, cycling, mountain climbing is a next level of gym and other way of keep ourselves fit. People can do only those who are already frt. I always encourage people who do things in different style. Here there are many IT companies are conducting some weekend events to boost up their employees. recently i went to munnar with my husband for vacation trip, there i have find one place called "Pulled Up" which is the best place i ever been before because that place is full of adventure game i tried mountain climbing therewith all the safety equipments ,even though that is for beginners i found it was tough. But it was too good.
According to my point everything is good as long as we try them in a safe way. Since my friends all fit and health conscious, i could strongly believes extreme activities never spoil any one lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79607843137 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54522794919 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639215686275 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.3874370092 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191523473086 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730617321081 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473527870825 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114562464772 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360346207913 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.