Diet

Essay topics:

Diet

The pie charts give information about how the ingredients are provided in three different diets, namely average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport.
It is clear from the pie charts that the proportions of carbohydrate are high in comparison with the others. Meanwhile, the fat only occupied the smallest percentage in each of the diets. The part of carbohydrate outweighed fat and carbohydrate in the healthy diet for sport.
There were 40 percent carbohydrate in the average diet, on the same level with protein. The carbohydrate was 50 percent of the constituent in the healthy diet and much more 10 percent than it in the average diet. In additionally, people who participate in the sports had the diet with 60 percent carbohydrate and about 15 percent with Fat
the protein decreased from 40 percent in the average diet to 30 percent in the healthy diet and in the diet for sportier it only had 25 percent in total. Having the same trend with protein, the proportions of the fat in the average diet and the healthy diet were 20 percent and there was a decrease by 5 percent in sporty diet.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74093264249 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73885049763 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435233160622 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9254270943 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466357526228 0.215688989381 216% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.256658482293 0.103423049105 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167552827303 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341410202096 0.15604864568 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140122501356 0.0819641961636 171% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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