The Benefits of Making a Healthy Lifestyle Change
Recently, healthy societies and individuals has sparked an persistent contention; furthermore, societies-healthiness had constantly been impressed by its ingredients lifestyle. Whereas it is a widely held view that people should preserve their physical and mental-health, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the socio-healthiness standpoint, healthy-mental are bound up inextricably with protecting our health somatically, which indicates they lead to both healthy and invulnerable society. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2017 demonstrates the relationship between physical and mental health as well as inevitable interaction amid societies and its members. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of people healthy lifestyle is correlated with not only their healthiness both physically and morally but also leading to a safe and granted community.
Within the realm of the healthiness, without the slightest doubt, people needs emphasize to the healthy lifestyle, so that, it would come down to the proper mental and physical healthfulness, healthy societies, and immune territory to live. A prominent example of such emphasis is the diverse diets followed by individuals, which is a cause for concern since inappropriate consumers’ regimen. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint unhealthy lifestyle-problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of the individual health to manage their healthiness societies.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes “all’s well that ends well,” after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that healthy lifestyle and consequently health-communities is vital. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 57, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1207.87684729 139% => OK
No of words: 278.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04316546763 5.00649968141 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66786551145 2.71678728327 135% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672661870504 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 379.143842365 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9702220194 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.727272727 104.977214359 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206765677359 0.242375264174 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708961798243 0.0925447433944 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519763062436 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117576110315 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288433235154 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 12.6369458128 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 11.5310837438 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.07 8.32886699507 133% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 55.0591133005 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.94827586207 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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