You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
*Introduce yourself
*Explain what experience and special skills you have
*Explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir or Madam, <span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> I am writing in r</span>esponse to the advertisement in a newspaper regarding the job vacancy available in your museum. I would like to express my anxiety in working for the betterment of your shop.
I am a permanent resident in New York for the past two years and I do reside in an apartment called the Golden Maple which is near your museum. Currently, I am working as a cashier in a coffee shop near the Berkeley University.
Being a citizen of the United Kingdom, I worked in London museum for a short period of six months. As a result, I have gained a little experience in handling and preserving the portraits and the other objects of a museum. In addition, I myself is an artist and have sold portraits for a small fee.
Would you kindly offer me the job? if you accept my request, it would be a great help for me to improve my career as I am planning to pursue a doctorate in History in my future. I hope you will consider my request. In case I am given an appointment order for the job, I would strive to the core and work to your entire satisfaction. if you have any suspicion about the verity of my declaration, I will, on further request attach the work experience certificates i have obtained in my previous workplaces which perhaps vindicate my experience.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Gayathri Mohandas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n style='font-size: 19.36px;'> I am writing in response to the a...
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...ing for the betterment of your shop. I am a permanent resident in New York fo...
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...e shop near the Berkeley University. Being a citizen of the United Kingdom, I...
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Suggestion:
...have sold portraits for a small fee. Would you kindly offer me the job? if yo...
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...ing from you. Yours faithfully, Gayathri Mohandas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 252.0 206.0 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68253968254 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13047454458 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.233753412 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310322067742 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104809975654 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403395679282 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152738608186 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454365253954 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.