Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
In your letter:
-when and where you hired it
-describe how the accident happened
-what kind of action did you take after the accident
Hello Sir or Madam,
My name is Tomasz Zawadzki and two weeks ago on 25th of October I hired a car from your company. The location of your brand shop where I borrowed the car is the Hobart Airport. I would like to mention that the staff of the store was extremely helpful because our fly was delayed, and they waited for me half an hour so I could pick up the car. Therefore, I would like to thank them for their help.
However, I am writing with regard to an accident that happened yesterday. Last night me and my wife were coming back to Hobart from our trip. Suddenly wild kangaroo run into the road, I was trying to avoid collision, but we hit him with our front bumper. Moreover, one of the front lights stop working so we could continue our travel that day. Also, we called nearest national park to inform them about the injured animal.
I hope, that insurance will cover all the repair.
Your sincerely,
Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52325581395 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18068212419 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68023255814 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8642988762 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.097065934469 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387133216587 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415015989787 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052800319573 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314747262906 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.