People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue.
In this burgeoning era,people are involved in hectic and stressful jobs.People do not have time for exercise and other physical activities which keep them fit.To remain fit is utmost crucial because Health is wealth. This essay will put light on the reasons for not having good health and suggest some ideas to keep it fit
There are plethora of reasons why people are not fit and active.First of all , people are doing stressful and long hours jobs. Because of globalization ,there are ample of work opportunities but are very hectic and involves lot of pressure.People are not able to maintain work life balance.In addition to this, all the family members are working so find it difficult to manage the personal and professional life. For an instance a survey has been conducted by leading newspaper that many people are suffering because of obesity because of busy schedule.further more, People like to spend their free time by doing entertainment activities like watching movie and other activities. Moreover eating habits of the people are also big predicament. People are more inclined towards fast food like Chinese, Italian rather than traditional home cooked food.Further more, Lack of awareness and time constraint are the great factors behind it.
So efforts should be made to curb this issue. First of all awareness campaigns should be arranged so that people can
better understand its repercussions.More parks and gardens must be built in every residential area so that people can utilize them for morning and evening activities.Schools should make it as part of curriculum.Although fast food is tasty and delicious but people must be made aware about its consequences at later stage.Importance of healthy and nutrition food must be channelized.Thus Awareness of the people is much incredible.
In the end it can be concluded that fitness of mind and body is need of the hour to have a long and healthy life. So people and even government should come forward for building a healthy and wealthy nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, as to, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20060790274 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09549422244 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577507598784 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.414192536 49.4020404114 266% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.1 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.9 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248871485013 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103919088692 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818452065312 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143587452141 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612974679722 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.