Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during the leisure time.
When it comes to leisure time, people's opinions vary on how to use it properly. Whether to spend it doing mind activities, such as reading and doing word puzzles, or totally rest the mind and perhaps doing some physical sports. In the following essay I will discuss both opinions.
Some people love to spend their free time doing various activities, that by a way or another improve the mind. They think that it is a better way to relief the body from the working effort, while at the same time using their leisure time properly, rather than being wasted. Reading is an example of those activities, with the millions of fields and topics, it is the ultimate way for enriching knowledge and expanding perceptions. Moreover, can also be an amusement source, when reading stories. Another activities that complement reading are solving word puzzles and Sudoku. They tend to activate the brain and improve mind amazingly, with being challenging at the same time.
Others on the contrary, specially students and people working with computers, refuse this idea and prefer to relax their minds during the leisure time. They feel themselves already exhausted from using their brains during the day, so they prefer to either rest, or do some physicals activities such as sports. Their idea is based on relieving the stresses and improving their stamina. Exercising, playing football and swimming are perfect examples for different physical activities.
In conclusion, leisure time is a great gift that should be perfectly used. The best approach, in my opinion is to have some of these and those. This way improves both the mind and the body equally, giving us the perfectly balanced healthy life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08571428571 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50133637751 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8270875172 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441461672783 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125476371438 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946815838949 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267281969234 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857373684249 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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