Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The importance of the youth in society is undeniable and they as the wealth of a community play an integral role in advancing the country. of course, the rate of the youth participation depends on the government’s politics but the state of the technology and modern era compels the government to consider more chances for younger to advance the country’s at the political, industrial and financial fields. While some group mentions to low rate of younger participation in the diverse fields, the evidence is in contrast with them. I am not in favor of fewer younger participation than the past base on three reasons like seizing the principal important positions in the government, having more volunteers for universities and taking part in the cultural, artistic and environmental issues.
First of all, youth effect on the political decisions around world are tangible however, in the past government choose the older person for significant positions due to their wisdom but in the modern era just wisdom or insight cannot be sufficient to advocate a country in the advancing progress and economical fight among countries. Attributes like being skillful, talent, vigorous and creative causes the use of youth in the noticeable positions on the political state. For instance, Canada’s prime minster can be an obvious example for prove this points. As a result, it can be easily prove that younger are more active in the political field in compare with the past.
As a second reason, universities and education’s role in the life and country’s future isn’t ambiguous to everybody. The researches outcome conform a fact that nowadays younger’s tendency for education is on high amount in compare with past due to increase the desire to be aware and active in the community. The educated person involves with societies current problems because their knowledge creates this opportunities. As an illustration, in Iran, the amount of the association is in the high position among educated person.
Finally, the social activities like cultural, artistic and especially environmental issues are the hot debate around the world which manage by younger. Youth have specific tendency to critic the around subjects and due to this characteristic they gather information and create groups to share the knowledge. The environmental issues that are one of the important activity these days are guide by youth. Because they want to reform and enhance the societies, persons like Greta Tunberg is a logical example to illustrate the youth participation in the society. So ,this point can be enough to repudiate the statement which mentions to low rate of younger association.
Consequently, I doesn’t agree with the few participation of young people than past base on three reasons, having significant roles in the government, having more tendency to be educated and involving with social activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, second, so, while, for instance, in contrast, of course, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2472.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36225596529 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12115621567 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503253796095 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4378772201 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.333333333 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6111111111 20.6045352989 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112371761198 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369454355495 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329527995371 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721406638257 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038462153248 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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