When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is of the common view that salary is the most important parameter while opting for any vocation. In this materialistic world, money plays a significant role in our lives which further defines our standard of living and status in this society. However, I strongly disagree that money is the most important factor in pursuing a career.
while money and finances are important for leading a life comfortably, it is not always the case. Firstly, a vocation which people love doing and entice their imaginations, may not be so lucrative in terms of wages. For instance, a coastguard may not be earning anything near to a share broker agent, but he might be enjoying his work which involves a lot of adventure and a sense of contribution to society.
Secondly, there are some people who worked hard and aimed for a fat paycheck, eventually ended up depressed and disinterested in the job they longed for because it no more excited them. there have been many instances of CEOs of top global companies who left at the peak of their career to pursue their dreamlike organic farming in the remotest of villages in India.
On the other hand, money is one of the most essential possession these days. An individual's status and success in society are estimated by his/ her bank balance, properties, cars, and clothing, even if one's moral values are questionable. For example, a person who owns a big bungalow in a posh locality is considered to be successful even if he/she is indulging in unlawful activities.
In summary, although wealth defines us in this materialistic and mean world, I strongly disagree that salary is the most important factor to choose a career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8838028169 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80585863684 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602112676056 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2535401412 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129968214106 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538801043008 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667959377563 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801672765977 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709734811278 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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