More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this development have more advantages over disadvantages
In this contemporary era, many individuals prefer to have junk food instead of fresh cooked food. this phenomenon is providing multifarious benefit to humanity, however sometimes a couple of problems emerge due to the same. The following paragraphs would cast light on pros and cons of having ready made food.
To begin with the bright side, ready-made food provide economical benefits to people. Most of the junk foods are fast serve and therefore helping people to save time during their lunch break as most of the items are pre cooked. They are easily available in markets as compared to fresh food product. For instances, 90% youngster choose junk food as compared to fresh cooked meal because they are fast served and made quickly.
Additionally, junk food is easy and simple to carry and can be eaten at your preferred locations. Most of people are busy in their work and they find it very difficult to manage cooking on a daily basis as a result they prefer to have ready-made food.
On the other hand, there are nasty consequence as well. Firstly, eating junk food can increase weight and it can cause obesity. Many junk food containers bad fats, preservatives and additives which are very detrimental for the health of people who are suffering from diabetic and undesirable heart problems. To exemplify this, 80% of school children in USA are found obese due to consumption of Coca Cola and chocolates in their daily intake.
To sum up, I personally believe that eating junk food can be advantages if it consumed in right proportion, however, they should also be careful that it does not lead to disastrous conditions with health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...junk food instead of fresh cooked food. this phenomenon is providing multifarious be...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...he bright side, ready-made food provide economical benefits to people. Most of the junk fo...
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Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to junk'
Suggestion: to junk
...ct. For instances, 90% youngster choose junk food as compared to fresh cooked meal b...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...n be eaten at your preferred locations. Most of people are busy in their work and they find it...
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Line 13, column 129, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun junk seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much junk', 'a good deal of junk'.
Suggestion: Much junk; A good deal of junk
...crease weight and it can cause obesity. Many junk food containers bad fats, preservatives...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97122302158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61588709162 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.924859899 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285944363051 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102898937276 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737481197026 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161366858173 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686085420336 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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