Are you for or again abortion ? And why?
Are you for or again abortion ? And why?
Answer:
It is common knowledge that abortion, which happens the most in the young generation, is a hot topic worldwide. While many people believe that this action is approved by the global communities and governments, others think that the international authorities and inhabitants must act to stop the situation once and forever. However, I do completely support the idea that abortion should be banned by global governments due to the two specific reasons.
One of those reasons is that people who abort can easy to kill themselves by the side effects after terminating, such as haemorrhage of woman, spotting and bleeding or worse is causing an indirect death to them. Meanwhile, the pregnancy is not entirely removed, and those persons are likely to pregnant again. For instance, Vietnam country is the place where has one of the highest abortion rates in the South East Asian nations, as well as holding the highest mortality rate in the Asia countries due to the abortion of their residents, especially their young generation. Needless to say that the complications, which happen during and after the surgical abortion, are utterly dangerous to those who have an abortion because of its impacts on mental health and physical health, like depression, suicide thoughts, eating disorders and so on.
Moreover, each individual is a living creature, so the foetus has the ultimate rights to live as a human. Therefore, we should give a chance to them to be born and lived as a human being, because no one has the power to take someone’s life, even their relatives. As a result of its disadvantages, we must forbid this immoral deed.
In conclusion, throughout two causes as mentioned, the authorities around the world must have the pressing solutions, such as: “ fetal rights in the USA “, to prevent citizens from aborting their children. Although there are lots of endless controversies over this matter, I strongly disagree with this immoral action, and we must stand together to end this inhumanity afterwards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16176470588 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85394652943 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620588235294 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.3749816912 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210037135004 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111393119939 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.213909504304 0.0667982634062 320% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242437770146 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.381998565794 0.056905535591 671% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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