The chart below show the proportion of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other language in addition to English in 2000 and 2010.
Presented pie chart highlight a comparative study regarding British student at one educational institution in England.Who were able to talk in the other language in addition to English over the duration of one decade starting from 2000 to 2010 in percentage.
Overall it is clear from the chart that in university were student only speak in English language in one decade.Which was about the one third.While German language were spoken similar during the years.Whereas, Spanish language lost their popularity in 2010 with 10 per-cent
It is explicitly observed that in 2000 English language was widely spoken by British student with 30% in comparison with French and another language both are similar spoken by pupils which was less that a fifth. Although Spanish language was second highest popular language in that time period. Moreover,in that University one in ten students generally spoke German and two other languages.
Now,turning to the next details of 2010.Whereas, English language once again maximum spoken by the students.Since in 2010 Spanish language lost it popularity by 10%.Despite, German language still similarly spoken by pupils over the decade.Also another language spoken by increment of one in twenty.While with comparison of French language another language is most spoken by students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, regarding, second, similarly, so, still, third, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56435643564 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95207280561 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50495049505 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 346.5 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 159.329344441 43.030603864 370% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.8 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.0 5.23603664747 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384017262553 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21892090318 0.103423049105 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138048179397 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270611476639 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122666035204 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.2329268293 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 61.2550243902 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 10.3012195122 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 11.4140731707 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 11.4329268293 254% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.