You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
sorry it's taken me so long to write to you but at last, I put pen to paper to explain why
I haven't returned that DIY book I borrowed from you.
To be honest, I've been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up to that I damaged the book accidentally. I'm so very sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was
passed down by your late father.
What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about DIY plumbing when I knocked over my coffee which splashed all over the book.
Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time.
I have sent the book to be repaired. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it.
Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I'll send it to you.
Again, I'm so sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.
- Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in countryside? What are the problems of this issue? What can be done to solve this problem? 54
- Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:• Say why you would like to go• Suggest what 84
- You ordered a book online for exam preparation. It has been some time since you ordered it and you still have not received your book. Write a letter to the e-commerce company about this.Describe your purchase order of the book.Explain the importance of th 73
- People nowadays are used to disposable items meaning that they use things for a short time and throw them away. What is the cause of this and what problems it can lead to? It is true that people of today belong to a throwaway culture, wherein they buy and 56
- with the help of internet television many people are becoming famous Is this a positive or negative trend Include examples 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sorry
sorry its taken me so long to write to you bu...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
..., I put pen to paper to explain why I havent returned that DIY book I borrowed from ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ok I borrowed from you. To be honest, Ive been feeling so guilty that I delayed w...
^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...o that I damaged the book accidentally. Im so very sorry. I know how important tha...
^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Passed
...portant that book is to you as it was passed down by your late father. What hap...
^^^^^^
Line 15, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... I have sent the book to be repaired. I didnt realize that was even possible until I ...
^^^^^
Line 17, column 75, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...w when I get it back next week and then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry...
^^^
Line 21, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nd then Ill send it to you. Again, Im so sorry for the delay in telling you. ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.96610169492 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05390349883 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6985321283 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.75 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 4.34317383033 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236716833557 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772660747289 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05864599656 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870999955549 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057506263438 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.15 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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