Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society.other argue that being citizen involves more responsibilities.Discuss what is your opinion?
Nowadays,group of people deem that they are regularly pay tariff to government which is enough to contribute to the community. However,many people do contention being a member of inhabitant involves more liability. There are both pros and cons to deciding to do this in this essay. I will discuss some of the reasons why people should take more obligation as a citizen and some of the challenges to be overcome.
Let's begin by looking at the advantages of tribute playing. One of the main positive point of it that if people paying taxes time to time then our national economy will be enlarge and country will be able to stand with other countries in many ways.Such as business Expo build new technological items and make more projects in nation to give employment.Secondly, if all the native pay duty then we are capable to demolish black money but this is not the adequate onus, there are also some responsibility to as a human being we should be follow.
Turning, to the other side of the controversy,mankind have other duty rather than only pay taxes.Which means society have to take part in social things for human welfare.They have to help other people according to People's problem this is often leads to Vashudhaiv kutumbkam.Another issue is that today we do not take care of our environmental situation.Due to this we are taking part in global warming.Also we all are widely used energy such as electricity and sometime we waste our vital source of energy.So this is our responsibility to save energy, fossil fuels,protect environment and follow the acts of government.
To sum up, personally,I believe that not only pay the impost time to time but also we have understand our original duty to beging as a human and citizen to save the world for better future of our upcoming generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90228013029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11374755305 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 197.717443591 49.4020404114 400% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.125 106.682146367 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.375 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190225026885 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976235814041 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855414228287 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125298575416 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102320810028 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.0946893788 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.