Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, advertisment has gained popularity. Some people believe that advertising is beneficial to people’s life . While I accept that advertising is an essential part of our lives, I believe that it is also harmful to people in some ways.
On the one hand, I accept that adervitising has positive aspect for a variety of reasons. The primary reason is that it is a key part of modern business. It can effectiveness to promote a new product so many companies usually share their product by advertising department . Another reason is advertisements is a creative industry that employs many people. Because it providing jobs opportunities and income so without it there would be higher unemployement. Furthermore, it also inform us about the choices we have so we can have variety of choices to select from .
On the other hand, advertising has some drawbacks for people due to some extent. Firstly, it manipulates people too badly. It aims to persuade people that buying a product will make them happier and with higher social status. In addition, it also capturing the minds of consumers to follow the latest trend. Secondly, advertisers aim their marketing at children who easily be influenced by interesting things. As a result, these children will put pressure on parents to buy them things.
In conclusion, while I accept that advertising has a play an important role on human lives, I consider that it also lead to some negative aspects for people, especially young age groups. It is recommended that advertisements should be regulated and controlled by governments
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15953307393 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09046060411 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3181631257 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41176470588 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272952924684 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846868021723 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852365242252 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174591573852 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102535481955 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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