Nowadays, people believe that teaching handwriting to children is of no use as most of the typing is done on computers.
Do you agree or disagree?
With the advent of technological advancements, individuals usually prefer devices including smartphones, tablets, and computers for writing purposes, whether report writing, thesis, and business emails. However, I partially agree with the former opinion, although I believe that technology is extremely important in the modern era, formal training in handwritten scripts can help anyone to grow professionally, and it can be useful for improving the brain activity at the same time.
Technology has made considerate progress in the past two decades. People usually prefer to communicate with their colleagues, friends, and family through computers because it is way faster and easier. Moreover, we do not require any strenuous pieces of training to learn how to write on computers compared to handwriting, which requires hours of training. It is generally thought that mastering handwriting requires extreme energy and time to be served on children, and most people are not going to write anything by hand in the future, it is better to introduce computer knowledge in the curriculum during early childhood education. Thus, children should learn to use electronic devices rather than wasting time and money for practising handwriting.
On the other hand, I believe that children must learn and master scriptwriting with hand because it can be helpful for them in the future. For example, in most of the Asian countries, children get interested in learning calligraphy. This is a skill used as a profession in these countries. Moreover, a well-written script also portrays the personality of the writer, and this thing also helps in the development of brain functioning. This can be explained with the argument that a person who writes well also thinks well. So, getting trained in handwriting not only helps to develop personality but also improves psychological behaviour as well.
To sum up, I would say that although technology is one of the direst needs of the present era, it is equally important for us to protect our traditional culture of handwriting, as it will help us grow professionally and personally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3502994012 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06471020419 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592814371257 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5206620292 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.642857143 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112486773538 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039315112721 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353350473859 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0589109782498 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403795893615 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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