As cities expanding, some people claim governments should look forward creating better networks of public transportation available for everyone rather than building more roads for vehicle owning population. whats your opinion.
Traffic is one of the big problem in the growing cities. Few individuals have opinion that government should create better network of public transportation rather than building more roads for vehicle owning population. In my opinion, the former notion has several elements that deserve attention and I will explain this by using pertinent arguments.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of my context, the most conspicuous one lies in that government must expand the network of public transportation. To illustrate, a recent survey conducted by the Stanford University, 75% people get benefits from expansion of public transportation network and it positively contribute to overall development of city. Hence, that is why many citizens are in favour of above stance.
Another argument in favour of my view is that governments worldwide have become more active to deal with this problem. To explain, a recent academic research carried out by Australian Government, 80% people immensely gained from the present government reforms. Thus, improvement in public transportation network lead the citizens towards better future.
For what has been discussed above it is clear that the benefits of expanding public transportation outweigh the building more roads for vehicle owning population. In my opinion, it is better to expand public transportation rather than more roads for owning vehicle population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities. Few individuals have opinion that government should create better network ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'contributes'?
Suggestion: contributes
...ransportation network and it positively contribute to overall development of city. Hence, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, thus, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59534883721 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03600175432 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1173096077 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.363636364 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432232465904 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167109085024 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196590883546 0.0667982634062 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269899891759 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161868568586 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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