The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In the contemporary world, it is vital to train wise leaders, whom we can rely on. Having excellent leaders in the government leads the country to success, and brings people joy and comfort. Similarly, having good leaders in industry and corporation significantly affect the corporation's success and its customers' satisfaction. But when do you think is the best time to train such leaders? Insightfully answering the question that whether the best way is to prepare young for leadership is by installing sense of cooperation or competition can provoke owing to the variety of factors contributing to the formation of a multidimensional viewpoint involving careful analysis. A number of people are in the conviction that successful leaders must have a strong sense of competition in order to lead their team to become the best among other. Their supposition is at odds with some others' embracing the view that cooperating with others help the team and organization to achieve the best and make the best decision for their team; in fact, in my vantage point, the latter carries more weight. I discuss my opinion in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, one cogent reason corroborating my deduction is that by cooperating with others one is able to use others' viewpoint and suggestion, which let him to see the problem from another side; therefore making wiser decisions. For instance, imagine a president who is a very good leader and politician, but not an excellent economist. When he confront economical issues in the country he cannot make the best decision without advice of a professional economist. For example, if a president whose its country import most of goods from China decides to prohibit importing goods from China due to some political problems may not see this the problem from this view without use of an economist's advice. Ergo, if leaders do not have the sense of cooperation but having the sense of competition with their teammates they would not ask and use their advice and knowledge, since they are afraid of losing their position and acceptance.
Another compelling reason deserving some words here is that having the sense of competition would create unmanageable conflicts and problems in the society. If we think that we are in competition with others we will not help each other to achieve something desirable, because we always want to be better than others. For example, imagine two Car selling organization leaders, if they help each other and discuss their experiences they would both be more succesfull than working otherwise.
However, some argue that having the sense of competition can also be very useful. It can be a reason for hardworking and always trying to improve. For instance, imagine the best selling car company. Why would they try to improve their products if they do not want to increase the gap between themselves and others without having the sense of competition?
All in all, if the above discussion is contemplated, it can be concluded that overally cooperation is a more useful factor that leaders at any level must have in order to lead their team and society in the best way possible. However, it is suggested that we must train young people to have a positive sense of competition which make them to work hard in order to improve their ability and performance alongside with having strong feeling of cooperation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2846.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 560.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08214285714 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.8645985582 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.853426154 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455357142857 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.8895077854 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190130291954 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580082926217 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382480813994 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110570711316 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03913071671 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.