More developing countries are given aid from international organizations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many second-world countries are provided assistance by multinational corporations to help them to make development plans. It is debated by some people that monetary assistance is crucial while others say that they should be given consultation and help that is pragmatic. I believe the latter will benefit them in uplifting their economy. Both these views will be discussed below with relevant examples.
On the one hand, providing financial help to those nations that are on the way of progress would assist them to use the money to formulate such policies that can be beneficial for the economic growth. For instance, when the World Bank provides cheap loans to Pakistan, authorities here introduce such programs where they encourage small entrepreneurs to take loans and establish a successful business, this in turn not only generate profits and increase government revenue through tax but also, provides employment to other citizens. However, I believe this would increase a country’s dependence on international entities and they would not try to work on their own.
On the other hand, advising developing nations on how to formulate policies and what techniques should be followed to implement them effectively can result in efficient performance of various sectors. If transnational entities teach this to these countries, it will lead to make them not to reply to others and try to find out and learn solutions to their problems. For example, it has been proved in a study by the Oxford University that when Amnesty International provided advisory services for free to the less developed nations, it helped them to improve performance if the overall economy. I believe this approach is better as it teaches them independence to grow.
To conclude, although giving help in monetary form to progressing countries by multinational entities can assist them to use this money for the economic growth, I believe that providing training on making efficient and better policies will be more effective approach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 29, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to develop'.
Suggestion: to develop
... own. On the other hand, advising developing nations on how to formulate policies an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96962322684 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.5656175744 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147022376795 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615822014799 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373604051876 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097878240109 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424296485549 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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